Iβm not the one
you write pretty
poetry for
I am the one
you slam metaphors
between your teeth
knot and twist
in your mouth
from a tongue
screaming out fragments
that will leave you numb
feeling the beauty of skin
and unhinging
a locked cathedral
to taste a little part
of my sin
This is one of those that’s so stunning that I’m mad I didn’t think of it first. Love your words, as always.
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Wow, this is an amazing comment.. I thank you so much! You have made my day. I love your words equally. I often think of that as well, damn why didn’t I think of that. HAHA. π
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I’ll have to copy your post into my journal of favorites by fellow bloggers. I’m glad I made your day merrier!
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Yes do… π
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Thank you
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Reblogged this on Among other things, J and commented:
Read this yesterday and came back to it again. It’s that captivating.
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Would you be okay with me featuring this on PresserPoets, a community poetry blog that I manage? I’m still so in love with it and I would love to share it with others.
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Oh yes of course! Thank you so much π
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Great! I’ll let you know a time once I have it ready π
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Sounds good! Thank you so much π
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